What A Character! 3 More Tips on Creating Great Characters


As followers of The Story Source know, I’ve written extensively about Breaking Bad, the Emmy award-winning show on AMC that wrapped its final season a few weeks ago. But I’m not here to praise the expert storytelling (ten Emmy awards), the suspenseful scenes (too many to name) or even the superb direction (Vince Gilligan is among the best in the business).

I’m here to talk about Saul Goodman.

Saul, played by the multi-talented Bob Odenkirk, is one of the funniest and fully developed secondary characters on television. After watching him for five seasons, I’ve fallen in love with Saul’s flagrant scheming and naked opportunism. But what exactly makes Saul so memorable?

It all comes down to character choices.

To help you tell stories with characters that are as colorful and rich as Saul, here are “3 More Tips on Creating Great Characters.” Follow these tips and you may have a spinoff show in your future.

  1. Simplify Your Descriptions. In real life, people are complex, full of nuance and subtlety. Unfortunately, when you tell a story, you only have a limited time to showcase secondary characters, so make your descriptions count. To do this, simply answer the question: Does the description paint a picture of the character for the audience? If the answer is no, make sure to add the necessary visuals to make the description pop out to a listener or reader.
  2. Use Metaphors and Analogies. In some instances, it can difficult to reduce whole characters to simple descriptions. This is where the right metaphor or analogy can help. For example, maybe your brother-in-law is a police officer with a buzz cut who sings songs from Michael Jackson’s “Thriller” in public places (go with it). One possible analogy is that your brother-in-law is like the child of Joe Friday and Lady Gaga. Another possible metaphor is that he’s a mix of the Hardy Boys and Fallout Boy. The key to finding the right metaphor or analogy for a character is to identify the unusual or prominent thing about the character and then offer a truthful comparison. Even if the analogy doesn’t get a huge laugh, it will at least resonate with the audience. Just remember: analogies should be used to augment descriptions, not to replace them.
  3. Serve The Plot. Once you’ve boiled down your characterizations and/or added an analogy, the final step in the process is to make sure that your character descriptions serve the story’s plot. For example, if you mention that your father used to shoot rabbits at the beginning of the story, the audience is expecting a reference to either guns or rabbits somewhere later in the story. If you don’t deliver on this promise, they’ll begin to wonder why you chose the original description. Once again, deliver what you promise! The upside of doing this is that it’s also an easy way to inject humor into your stories.

Feeling better about your characters?

(Originally posted at The Story Source.)

Andrew Linderman
Writer. Teacher. Consultant.


People make choices. Choices make people. “What A Character! 3 Tips on Creating Great Characters” by @lindermania at http://t.co/gGsUvzKGrg

FWD:labs (@fwdlabs) #

What I particularly love about Saul as a character is that in the whole world of lies and deceit of breaking bad,
SAUL is the only character who ALWAYS tells the truth.

The archetype and sleaziness of an ambulance chasing attorney is simply a facade.

Walter commits despicable acts yet his intentions are noble.

I love characters that are multilayered. I love villains with convictions of righteousness and justice.

Good stuff Andrew, would love to see more!

Tim Cruz #

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